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Grounds to Kill by Wendy Roberts

Title:Grounds to Kill
Author:Wendy Roberts
PublisherCarina Press
Publication Date:January 7, 2013
Publisher's DescriptionBarista Jen Hanby's coworkers give her a hard time for bringing coffee and pastries to a homeless man who sits outside her cafe - but she has a secret. The scruffy man is her father.

She's also hiding the little matter of why her palm itches. But how can she explain that her hand has a mind of its own and writes messages from the beyond? Right. That'll get her Employee of the Month.

When she finds herself scrawling your boyfriend is cheating on you! to herself on the bathroom mirror, she immediately dumps the guy. But then his little fling—who just happens to be her half sister—turns up dead, and suddenly Jen's homeless father is the prime suspect.

Jen knows he is being framed and must take matters into her own hands to protect him. But will anyone believe that the crazy old man is innocent? Or that his spirit-writing daughter holds the truth?
My rating:***.5

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This beginning of this review is heavy on the generalities, and the section that contains spoilers is clearly marked.

This was a cute little mystery (if a book centered around a murder can be called cute). Jen was a relatable character who handled some crazy things in believable ways. I mean, if I had a terrible half-sister who I hated and who later turned up dead, I think I might respond in much the same way as Jen. She took realistic, albeit not always smart, steps to prove her innocence and that of her father. Jen’s  support network, in the form of her friends and coworker, Mitch, added depth to her character and helped move  the story along. The whodunnit element of this book was well done, but wasn’t as big of a draw for me as the interpersonal relationships. Jen’s itchy palm was a cool addition to the story, and I appreciate that it wasn’t used as a lazy way for Ms. Roberts to magically advance the plot. While I appreciate red herrings, there were loose ends in this book that detracted from my enjoyment of it. I don’t ever want to think so much about lemon muffins again in my life.

Spoilers, commence.

I really, really, really wish that there hadn’t been a romantic angle in this book; it felt shoehorned in and unnecessary. Having established Jen and Mitch’s working friendship in a very different way, it strained credulity that a woman who was planning her six-month anniversary dinner with her boyfriend in the beginning of the book could already be on her way to serious emotional investment in somebody else by the end of it. Mitch said that he felt he had to tell her right after she broke up with Arthur, before she’d moved on to somebody else, but it would have been nice if he’d given her a breather.

As initially described, Jen and Mitch’s  relationship lacked the underlying tension that would have made their new direction more believable for me. While it was clear that Jen did find Mitch attractive, I didn’t get the impression that he thought of her that way from how he spoke with her; he seemed to regard her solely as a good friend. Am I supposed to believe that he teased her to disguise some his unspoken romantic attachment to her? Because that’s a little junior high-ish for me (hello, DJ Tanner). I would have appreciated any words or actions from him that would have made his later declaration of feelings for Jen seem like a natural progression instead of an unexpected 180. I don’t mind seemingly sudden relationship changes that are a surprise to a character who isn’t looking for them if there’s something that I as a reader can look back on as a potential clue. The way that Jen and Mitch went from friends to smoochy buddies didn’t sit well with me. Grounds to Kill feels like it could be the first book in a series; if so, it would have worked better for me to have the author use this book to set the stage for Jen and Mitch to kiss (and etc) in a future title. Hmmm, apparently I have a lot of feelings about this.

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The Stranger: Just One Night, Part 1 by Kyra Davis

Title:Just One Night, Part 1: The Stranger
Author:Kyra Davis
PublisherPocket Star
Publication Date:January 21, 2013
Publisher's DescriptionKasie knows who she’s supposed to be. But one passionate night with a mysterious stranger will teach her who she wants to be.
You should sleep with a stranger, her best friend whispers in her ear as they take to Vegas for one last pre-wedding fling. Despite her best intentions, when Kasie Fitzgerald enters the casino and sees him, a man whose tailored clothes belied a powerful, even dangerous, presence, she loses herself to the moment. Maybe it’s the dress, much shorter than she’d ever normally wear, or the Scotch, but something makes her give herself over to him more completely than she's ever done with a man before.

It was supposed to be just one night. But right as she’s thinking she wants more, he shows up in her office with an agenda. As the billionaire CEO of a company that’s engaged her PR firm, his demands just became her reality...and he desires so much more than just some attention in the boardroom.
My rating:***

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I am a fan of Kyra Davis’s previous books, both her series and standalone titles, so I was exited to see a title by her in the NetGalley catalog. I always like to see authors work in different genres, so I was interested to see what her foray into erotica would bring. After having read Just One Night, I will say that while I don’t think that it is a great read, it interested me enough that I will read the next installment.  

Oddly enough, it wasn’t the erotica in this book that didn’t work for me; those were fine. Ms. Davis managed to blend the sexy fun times with an interesting plot. First first thing about this book that annoyed me was the language. This book is full of metaphors. It’s actually bursting with metaphors (that is a metaphor). I like figurative language as much as the next person, but at some point, I want things to be said. I think this problem is directly related to the second thing that bothered me: Kasie. Kasie was the one using most of the metaphors, because she wasn’t a fan of reality, and it seemed like the figurative language gave her another layer to hide behind. Since Kasie was not that into reality, sometimes I was not that into Kasie.

 
Likewise, Robert Dade is, in the vein of Christian Grey and Gideon Cross, far too good to be true. I know this is fiction, but come on. A super rich, sexy, sexually experienced and adventuresome guy who wants nothing more than to help some undersexed woman rectify her criminal lack of multiple-orgasmic experiences? Give the guy a prize. Obviously, I get why Dade is sexy, and I might even understand why he is attracted to Kasie, but what keeps him coming back? Her indecision got annoying pretty early on, and her fiance was so obviously wrong for who she really was that staying with him seemed more like cruelty than anything else. I award her no points for her selective fidelity or after-the-fact guilty freakouts. 
 
Asha might prove to be interesting in further installments, but in this book, she was kind of annoying. She popped in long enough to say something that was equally insightful and bitchy, and then disappeared for another 40 pages. Alrighty then. 
 
This book had problems, but they’re not insurmountable. The second installment is going to determine whether I stick with this series or call it a day. 
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Defying the Odds by Kele Moon

Title:Defying the Odds: A Battered Hearts Series Book 1
Author:Kele Moon
Publisher:Loose Id
Publication Date:December 2011
Publisher's DescriptionWhen struggling waitress Melody Dylan gives a handsome, lonely stranger a simple gift she has no clue her life is about to take a drastic turn.

The stranger ends up being Clay Powers, a famous UFC heavyweight fighter. Clay’s large build and dangerous fists have always intimidated. People in his hometown keep their distance and Clay is fine with that. Everything changes when a new waitress at the local diner buys him a piece of pie on thanksgiving. Touched by the gesture when it’s obvious she can barely afford to survive, her warm smile and lush body churn up powerful feelings that leave Clay wanting more from her than pie.

Melody is running from her past and the small, country town of Garnet is the perfect hiding place. With an ex-husband after her and scars from her abusive marriage etched deep, the last thing she expects is to fall for a man who makes a living with his fists, but she can’t resist Clay or the tender connection they share.

Finding love in the most unlikely of places, the passion is undeniable, but Clay and Melody know their haunted pasts and unpredictable futures leave the odds stacked against them.

Publisher's Note: This book contains explicit sexual situations, graphic language, and material that some readers may find objectionable: violence.
My rating:****

dtomoonThis book was a pleasure to read. I really liked how Ms. Moon established Melody and Clay’s personalities so quickly and clearly. I felt invested in them immediately, and was interested in every step of their relationship. Part of this was due to Ms. Moon’s keen ear for dialogue; the characters conversed believably, without long passages of backstory exposition. Speaking of dialogue, I normally have trouble getting into novels where the characters’ accents are written phonetically, but not here. I was so interested in this world that I didn’t care how the people sounded; if you knew me, you’d understand what a huge deal this is.

The erotic elements of this book were hot, which is a given in this genre, and well-written, which is not. I felt that they flowed nicely into the narrative bits of this book. It’s so jarring to read an erotic novel where the sexy bits seem as though they take place in a universe disconnected from the rest of the book, and I’m happy that that didn’t happen here.

The woman in danger trope isn’t a new one, but Ms. Moon’s kept it from feeling boringly familiar. In addition to having a way with dialogue, she also has a knack for creating believable and engaging supporting characters. I’d never read anything by Kele Moon before, but this book has made me a fan. I know that Defying the Odds is the beginning of this series, and I’m excited to read the rest of the books in it.

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Mimi by Lucy Ellmann

Title:Mimi
Author:Lucy Ellmann
Publication Date:2/26/2012
Publisher's DescriptionIt's Christmas Eve in Manhattan. An eminent plastic surgeon slips on the ice, lands on his butt, and sprains his ankle. So far, so good. A woman such as he's never known yanks him to his feet and conjures the miracle of a taxi. Harrison recuperates with Franz Schubert, Bette Davis, and a foundling cat. Then it's back to rhinoplasties, liposuction, and the peccadilloes of his obnoxious colleagues. It is only when he collides again with that strangely helpful woman that things take a wild and revolutionary turn. Sparkling, polemical, irreverent, slippery, and sexy, Mimi is a love story, a call to arms, and Lucy Ellmann's most tender and dazzling book. It's also the feminist novel of the century. (So far.)
My rating:**.5

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I was intrigued when I read the description of this book, and excited when Bloomsbury USA allowed me access to it via Netgalley, but I’m sad to say that Mimi never lived up to my hopes. I can’t say expectations, because I’d never before read anything by Ms. Ellmann, so I didn’t know what I’d get in this book. I thought this was an interesting little story about two strange people, but to call this the feminist novel of the century so far? I think not.

It took me a while to get into the book, because Harrison Hanafan was too manic a character for me to get a handle on initially. I had trouble reconciling this person who bounced from subject to subject and thought to thought with little apparent purpose with the steadiness of mind and hand required to be a top plastic surgeon in New York City. Mimi, too, was so unbearably precious that she never seemed like a realistic character to me. The conversation during their meet cute grated on me and felt fake. Likewise, everything about Gertrude, including her name, struck me as to awful to be believed. If such a woman was real, I find it hard to believe that anybody would put up with her for as long as Harrison did.

I feel that it took Mimi about 20 or 30 pages to settle into what I’d consider a readable rhythm. I’ve given up on books sooner than this, but I wanted to stick it out, and I’m glad I did. Over the course of the book, Mimi and Harrison came to feel less like caricatures and more like representations of actual, functioning people. I don’t think that Mimi was a bad book; in fact, at some points it was laugh-out-loud funny. I just found it ever so twee. I’m fairly certain that if an infinite number of hipster monkeys from Brooklyn sat typing on their restored vintage typewriters for an infinite amount of time, one of them would eventually produce Mimi.

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Bride for a Night by Rosemary Rogers

Title:Bride for a Night
Author:Rosemary Rogers
Publication Date:September 20, 2011
Publisher's DescriptionAfter Talia Dobson is jilted at the altar, she endures another humiliation: a substitute groom! The elder brother of her runaway betrothed has taken matters into his own hands. Shy Talia has long held a secret attraction for Andrew Richardson, the handsome Earl of Ashcombe. But when she’s wedded, bedded and dispatched alone to his country estate, the timid beauty discovers one night of passion has ignited a bold inner fire.

While his lovely green-eyed bride is out of sight, she is not far from Andrew’s mind—and when Talia is abducted by French spies, the earl fears he may lose what he’s only just found. Yet the wife he races to rescue is a far cry from the gentle bride he abandoned. She’s a woman who dares to demand forever after from her husband…
My rating:***

The premise of this book was refreshing; so often, Recency books seem to downplay the extreme classism that existed during this time period. Nobility and the untitled members of the ton really did look down on those whose money was recently gained by trade or commerce. Even those families that needed the infusion of cash and traded their good/titled/old names for money often considered themselves better than the spouses whose money enabled them to continue to move in good society. I appreciated that this was a major point in this book, because too often, authors of these types of book like to pretend that beauty, or wit, or any quality intrinsic to the female protagonist is enough to change centuries of widely held beliefs about people not of the ton. So I liked that not everybody was won over by the plucky, rich-but-outside-of-the-highest-society Talia.

Actually though, when you come down to it, Talia wasn’t all that plucky. I think she’s the type of character that other romance authors subtly disparage when they say that their female protagonist isn’t some shy, retiring miss. Talia is all of these things, and she’s not boring. I think it takes more effort to make a quiet character interesting, and although I worried that Talia was just too good for Andrew, she was never dull.

Talia was able to win over people with her sweet nature and sincere efforts to improve the lives of her tenants. She was a simple, charitable person whose ruthless father was determined to buy his daughter’s, and therefore his own, entree into high society, no matter the cost. He didn’t care that the groom he’d procured for his daughter was marrying her only for her dowry. And when that man ran away with the money, instead of possibly learning from his past errors, Talia’s father then forced the runaway groom’s older brother to make good on his brother’s promise. Family loyalty is a theme that is repeated throughout this book in many ways: a child’s duty to her father, a brother’s duty to his brother, and a husband’s duty to his wife.

Andrew was a total ass for the first half of this book, and if this had been a different type of novel, it would have served him right if Talia had decided to stay in France with Jacques (who was pretty delicious, if you were willing to overlook his tendency to engage in espionage). Harry was a terrible person, and while I suspect that he’ll get his own novel at some point, although what he really needs is swift butt-kicking immediately followed by a date with the guillotine.

The title, blurb, and the cover of this book all work to undermine what actually occurred in it. The cover is so generic as to be useless, and the title is obviously wrong; even when Andrew sent Talia away, she never stopped being his wife. I guess we could be pedantic and say that all married women are brides for one night, and then after that they’re just wives, but I’m fairly certain that this isn’t where whoever came up with this title was going with this. So, anyway, bad title. And the blurb? I don’t see where Talia did much in the way of “demanding.” She wanted out of France, and was always going to go with Andrew, even without understanding how their relationship would be any different this time around.

There’s nothing new about the territory covered this book, although it’s perhaps more amusing than one would suppose it to be. It’s a decent read if you’re looking for something quick with a good amount action, but doesn’t do much to distinguish itself from the tens (hundreds?) of romance novels published each year that take place in this same time period.

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